For the rest of the year, I’ll analyze the Jack Ryan Season 2 TV series which is available on Amazon Prime.
Here we have the 6 Core Questions every editor asks when he/she reviews a manuscript, they are the core of any great novel, the key parts that make or break the story.
If you didn’t see Jack Ryan Season 1, check out my analysis here.
I enjoyed the series, but I thought the writers got a little lazy with the ending, so I hope they can regroup and make this new season great.
The series description from Amazon: “After tracking a potentially suspicious shipment of illegal arms in the Venezuelan jungle, CIA Officer Jack Ryan heads to South America to investigate. Jack’s actions threaten to uncover a far-reaching conspiracy, leading him and his fellow operatives on a mission spanning the globe“.
For the rest of this post, we’ll discuss the 6 Core Questions based on Shawn Coyne’s book The Story Grid.
According to Shawn Coyne, an editor with over 25 years of editing experience, after reading a novel one time, an editor should be able to answer these 6 Core Questions without “having any serious head scratches”. These questions will help an editor determine where any problems are in the manuscript.
Shawn Coyne describes Genre as “the most important decisions” an author needs to make. “Those choices will tell the reader what they are in for if they pick up the book”.
The six core questions are meant to be answered after reading the book, or in this case after watching the series. From watching the last season and the trailer for this season, I’m assuming the series is either in the ‘Action’ or ‘Thriller’ Genre, and both these Genres have similar components. For arguments sake, I’m going to assume that the Genre for the Jack Ryan series is the Action Genre. At the end of the series, we’ll revisit the 6 core questions and answer them accurately, but in order to progress through the rest of the questions we need to assume a Genre.
The main difference between Action and Thriller is that the hero doesn’t really change his worldview perspective, or in other words, Jack Ryan is the same in the beginning and the end of the series, he makes no big internal changes.
So for Jack Ryan Season 2 Genre:
These are the scenes in the story that will ultimately make it work, the scenes that the reader expects because of the Genre. As we go through the series, I’ll identify these scenes in the posts.
Here you list all the points of view within the novel. For a television series, and even a movie, it’s a little more difficult, because in a novel you will usually only have a few different points of view. On television, you may have scenes from many points of view that are not in a novel the show was adapted from, and this is necessary in order to show things more clearly since you can’t easily get into the head of the characters like you can in a novel.
For the Jack Ryan series, I imagine that most of the scenes will be done from the titular character’s POV, Jack Ryan. By that I mean, Jack Ryan will be in most of the scenes and the audience is seeing the plot unfold at the same time as the protagonist. There might be some other POVs from secondary characters. As I mentioned, we’ll revisit the 6 Core Questions after I analyze the whole series.
In season one, they flipped back between enemy POVs and significant victim POVs (like Saluman’s wife in a couple episodes)
What are the protagonist and antagonist’s objects of desires? What do they want? What do they need? Once the series is finished, it should be very obvious. For action and thriller genres, the want of the protagonist is usually to survive, to live – especially wince the External Value at Stake is life and death. The Internal Value at Stake will usually lead to what the protagonist needs, and I don’t know that right now. The antagonist usually wants to kill the protagonist in some way, but we’ll see how this plot develops.
Shawn Coyne describes the controlling idea as “the takeaway message the writer wants the reader/ viewer to discover from reading or watching his story”.
For this series, I imagine the controlling idea will be something like this:
Life is preserved when the protagonist (Jack Ryan) overpowers or outwits the antagonist.
Shawn Coyne explains the math of most novels as broken into 3 parts or acts, the beginning Hook, the Middle Build, and the Ending Payoff. Generally, the Beginning Hook consists of about 25% of the novel, the Middle Build 50%, and the Ending Payoff about 25%.
Each one of these acts should have 5 commandments:
These 15 scenes (5 commandments for each act) make up the spine of the novel. The sixth question involves identifying these 15 scenes in the novel (or series) and creating a short description of each act. We’ll track these through the weeks and at the end, when we revisit the 6 Core Questions, we will summarize these 15 scenes.
So over the next 8 weeks, I’ll analyze each episode of the Jack Ryan Season 2 series using the 5 commandments. Along the way, I’ll identify the obligatory scenes and the conventions for the Action Genre. And at the end, I’ll summarize the 6 core questions and explain why the series did or didn’t work.
Overall, as an editor, this is the process I initially go through when I review a novel for an author. I follow this up with specific scene analysis.
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