For All Mankind E4

This post will analyze the the Episode 4, titled “Nixon’s Women”, of the For All Mankind television series using the 5 Commandments of Storytelling and the Editor’s 6 Core Questions from the book The Story Grid by Shawn Coyne.

SPOILER ALERT!!!

Obviously, I will be discussing plot points from the television series For All Mankind. So, check it out before reading further.

Recap of Episode 3 “Nixon’s Women”:

  • Nixon orders co-priorities of NASA are establishment of lunar base and a women on the moon, “preferably blond”
  • Deke must train 20 women astronauts, because there were none in the program at that time
  • Tracy Stevens because Nixon’s poster girl
  • Tracy doesn’t believe she belongs
  • Tracy helps fellow trainee in the desert survival phase
  • Patty is killed in a training accident

Review of Episode 4 “Prime Crew”:

  • Deke is told to drop the women project after the accident that killed Patty
  • The Vietnam War is over and Ted Kennedy runs for president against Nixon
  • Deke goes against orders and announces to the press that Molly Cobb is going tot he moon
  • Russian shuttle crashes
  • Apollo 15 will search for base location
  • Molly has clashes with her crew during training, but turns it around
  • Karen is a lesbian
  • Molly and crew launch

Inciting Incident: 

Molly thinks they will cancel the women’s program because of the accident.

Turning Point:

Deke is told to drop the women’s project after the accident that killed Patty

Crisis Question:

Does Deke drop the women’s program or not? His stakes: if he drops the program it is against his moral code, if he doesn’t he might lose his job.

Climax:

He announces that Molly will go up in Apollo 15.

Resolution:

Molly trains and blasts off.

Summary:

I’m still hooked, can’t wait to see what happens next.

More Story Analysis

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My blog posts analyzing other Television series – my person take using the Story grid 5 Commandments to look at my favorite TV series – Jack Ryan, Batgirl, For All Mankind, Hanna, and more.

Novel analysis – I analyze some of my favorite books using the Story Grid 5 Commandments and 6 core questions – First Blood, Old Man’s War, Waylander, and more to come!

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