Randy Surles - Developmental Editor
Mentoring Authors One Scene at a Time – Thriller/Military/Non-Fiction/SF/Fantasy
Category: 5 commandments
Jack Ryan S1Ep2
Does the Jack Ryan TV series make for good storytelling? Here I analyze the episodes using the Story Grid to find out why it does or doesn’t.
Gentleman Jack Ep3
The 5 Commandments of Gentleman Jack: Episode These are the 5 Commandments of Storytelling as outlined by Shawn Coyne in his book The Story Grid: What good Editors Know. These commandments can be found in all stories that really work. Inciting Incident: Anne Lister’s… Continue Reading “Gentleman Jack Ep3”
Gentleman Jack Ep2
I am releasing this early because I want to publish the Episodes as I watch them to see if my predictions are correct and I’m a few episodes behind. The 5 Commandments of Gentleman Jack: Episode 2 These are the 5 Commandments of Storytelling… Continue Reading “Gentleman Jack Ep2”
Gentleman Jack Ep1
The 5 Commandments of Gentleman Jack: Episode 1 These are the 5 Commandments of Storytelling as outlined by Shawn Coyne in his book The Story Grid: What good Editors Know. Inciting Incident: Anne Lister’s lover, Vere Hobart, leaves her for a man This specific… Continue Reading “Gentleman Jack Ep1”
Afghanistan 2002.
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