Randy Surles - Developmental Editor
Mentoring Authors One Scene at a Time – Thriller/Military/Non-Fiction/SF/Fantasy
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Treadstone Ep1
Treadstone Episode 1 – Kind of confusing, some good action, but does the Story Work?
The Story Grid Knows!!
Treadstone Intro
Treadstone is a new action series on the USA Network, will the story work? We’re going to find out. The Story Grid knows!!
Hanna – Episode 4
Story Grid Analysis of Hanna Season 1 Episode 4. Does the Story Work? The Story Grid Knows!!
Hanna – Episode 3 & BH
Story Grid analysis of Hanna Season 1 Episode 3 and the Beginning Hook. Does the Story Work? The Story Grid Knows!
Jack Ryan – 6 Core Questions
Jack Ryan Season 1 – Does the Story Work? The Story Grid Knows!!
Analysis using the Story Grid 6 Core Questions.
Jack Ryan S1Ep8
Does the Jack Ryan series satisfy the viewer? Does it work as a story? The Story Grid knows!
Afghanistan 2002.
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