Fiction Services

With 25+ years of military experience, let me help you make your action characters and scenes more authentic. Contact me and tell me about your writing project.

I offer two types of Editing Services to my clients.


Do you have written a novel that still needs some work, but you’re not sure how to move forward with your manuscript?  A manuscript diagnostic might be just what you need.


If you have a completed manuscript or you’re nearly finished, you’re just stuck on a few points, then Developmental Editing might be able to help you get on track.

Thinking about hiring me to edit your manuscript?

I offer a sample scene analysis (up to 3000 words for a novel-length manuscript) to include a 30 minutes video call in order to discuss my analysis, talk about your manuscript, and review editing options.

Randy exceeded my expectations. The level of detail and analysis he provided me was tremendously helpful. He digested my manuscript so thoroughly that he was able to give me unique observations and suggestions that will enable me to greatly improve the story. In addition, he provided me a host of references and resources to better understand the writing process and my genre. I can’t recommend him enough.

Lance B., Author

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