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For All Mankind Ep8

Posted on December 13, 2019 by

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A loved one at death’s door, a father 240,000 miles away. For All Mankind Ep8. Does the story Work? The Story Grid knows!!

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For All Mankind E6

Posted on November 30, 2019 by

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Explosion on the launchpad, 3 astronauts stranded on the moon. Is it Russian sabotage or equipment failure?
And more importantly, does the story work? Find Out! The Story Grid Knows!!

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For All Mankind E5

Posted on November 25, 2019 by

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Does the story work in For All Mankind Episode 5? Find out! The Story Grid knows!!

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