Tag: Thriller Genre

Treadstone Intro

Posted on October 16, 2019 by

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Treadstone is a new action series on the USA Network, will the story work? We’re going to find out. The Story Grid knows!!

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Jack Ryan S1Ep5

Posted on July 31, 2019 by

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This post analyzes the Amazon Prime television series Jack Ryan using the 5 Commandments of Storytelling and the Editor’s 6 Core Questions from the book The Story Grid by Shawn Coyne. SPOILER ALERT!!! This post will spoil everything about episode 5 from the Jack…

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Jack Ryan S1Ep3

Posted on July 22, 2019 by

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Jack Ryan Episode 3, does the story work? The Story Grid knows! Let’s break down the elements that make it work.

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