Randy Surles - Military Fiction Editor
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Tag: Thriller Genre
Showrunners 031: Ozark S2 Analysis and Foolscap
The Netflix TV series Ozark Season 2, Does the Story Work or not, and Why? The Story Grid knows!
Showrunners 030: Ozark S1 Foolscap and Analysis
Netflix TV series Ozark Season 1, Does the story work? Why or Why not? The Story Grid knows!
Showrunners 028: Killing Eve Season 3 Foolscap
Does the story work? Does Season 3 of Killing Eve work? Why or Why not? Is it better than the other seasons? The Story Grid knows!
Showrunners 26: KE S3E7 Beautiful Monster
Does the story work for Killing Eve Season 3 Ep7 – Beautiful Monster? The Episode has more action than the rest of the season, but is it too little too late? Find out, the Sotry Grid Knows.
Scrivener + Story Grid – Part 1: The Set Up
Want to learn how to merge the fantastic writer’s tool Scrivener with the awesome Editing Methodology The Story Grid? This is the post for you!
Showrunners E13: Killing Eve Season 2 Foolscap
Does Killing Eve Season 2 work as a story? Find out as the SG Showrunners analyze the entire series and answer the Editor 6 Core Questions.
Treadstone Intro
Treadstone is a new action series on the USA Network, will the story work? We’re going to find out. The Story Grid knows!!
Jack Ryan S1 Ep5
This post analyzes the Amazon Prime television series Jack Ryan using the 5 Commandments of Storytelling and the Editor’s 6 Core Questions from the book The Story Grid by Shawn Coyne. SPOILER ALERT!!! This post will spoil everything about episode 5 from the Jack… Continue Reading “Jack Ryan S1 Ep5”
Jack Ryan S1Ep3
Jack Ryan Episode 3, does the story work? The Story Grid knows! Let’s break down the elements that make it work.
Afghanistan 2002.
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